DEATH HAD YELLOW EYES
(July 22, 2004)
What a dud. This story has all the ingredients to make a first-rate Doc Savage adventure. Mysterious goings-on, a strange superscientific invention in the wrong hands, a sudden journey to a foreign land, a hot redhead named Doris Day (heh) and some suspicious tag-alongs, some action and mayhem.... but it`s all done in such a half-hearted manner that it`s really not enjoyable.Either go for over-the-top wild pulp adventure or settle down to taut suspense drama, but none of this lukewarm halfway stuff, please... it just doesn`t work.
DEATH HAD YELLOW EYES was published in February 1944. The very next month featured the infamous story in which Doc suffers a skull fracture which nearly kills him and which indeed leaves him nervous, fearful and indecisive for the next year or so. Yet even before that sad development (which gave an in-story explanation for our boy`s decline)t, Lester Dent had already been working under editorial commands to tone the Man of Bronze down to more normal levels. It shows in this clunker.
(You know, it`s a bit late now by sixty years or so, but if they wanted to make our boy seem more human and realistic, why do it by giving him a timid, fearful personality? No one was forcing the guy to go out solving mysteries and fighting crooks, so the idea he was terrified all the time seems just wrong. On the other hand, Doc DID have a temper. There were a number of times in the series where he blew up and either yelled at people or administered a terrific beating. Considering that here`s a man six feet seven inches tall, with muscles where most people don`t even have room for, it would be more believable if Doc reacted to tension and anxiety by getting surly. I think a bad-tempered Doc Savage would be pretty scary and make for some memorable stories.)
As it is, most of the traits that gave this series its distinctive flavor have been dropped. The strange scientific upbringing, the daily two hour exercises, the Mayan gold, the wonderful and sometimes whacky gadgets... all gone. A new reader would conclude that this guy was just a famous surgeon
with a hobby of fighting crime.
Anyway, DEATH HAD YELLOW EYES starts off strongly but quickly takes off in a tedious direction and goes downhill fast. In Ham Brooks' dignified and pretentious apartment overlooking Fifth Avenue, a visiting Monk is badly spooked by the feeling that someone or something is in the gloomy room with him. It`s the same sort of feeling you get when you somehow know that you`re being watched. The fact that he thinks he has seen two faint yellow spots floating in the air like a pair of ghostly eyes doesn`t add much to his state of mind. Shortly thereafter, Monk is conked on the head (he must have scar tissue all over his scalp by this time) and carried off, and the game is afoot.
A Spoiler warning would probably be usually required, but this story is so slack and so little is done with the big secret that I don`t think anyone would be miffed by revealing it. We`re dealing here with not a Cloak of Invisibility, but more like a Stealth Poncho. The darn things were devised by the Germans to aid in the war but have too many limitations to be considered really successful. For one thing, they only provide camouflage in dim surroundings; strong light reveals them plainly. Also, the wearer`s eyes show through the two holes needed to peek out (the yellow spots mentioned).
Still, even with those drawbacks, the stealth cloth has a lot of possibilities which are never explored. Ten years earlier, the villains would have gone on a rampage that would have the city or the entire country in a panicked uproar (see THE SPOOK LEGION for an effective use of invisible crooks). Instead, the cloth is hardly seen (ho, ho) in this story and mostly provides a hot potato for the characters to chase after.
After the first creepy scenes, DEATH HAD YELLOW EYES promptly goes over familiar plot threads. Once more, Doc and his two sidekicks are framed for murder (Rocky voice: "Again?! But that trick never works!" ), escape and tangle with some Nazi spies while trying to figure out which of the secondary cast are on which side. Our heroes are forced aboard a Nazi plane and flown to Roumania but not much is done with that setting either (how I miss the days when Doc had his adventures in exotic places like the Sargasso Sea or Tibet or Chile...). It all unfolds rather disinterestedly.
Still, this is not one of those books which are so clumsy or dull that they defy being read. It just suffers in comparison to the creative thrills and excitement of the early Doc stories. And even in this more subdued, less highly charged atmosphere, DEATH HAS YELLOW EYES does provide some nice touches.
For one thing, Johnny gets a chance to shine. Entirely on his own initiative, the bony archaeologist sets out to rescue his friends from a sticky situation. Getting together a disguise, preparing a gadget to neutralize a room full of police and reporters, providing protection for his partners, having a series of getaway vehicles ready... William Harper Littlejohn pulls it off beautifully. Even better, he does NOT get caught or stalled by some stroke of bad luck. I always enjoy it when the five aides show they`re competent and deserve to be on Doc`s team.
Also, although our bronze man has been taken down a few notches on the superhuman scale, he`s still impressive. Tackling two trained men who are fighting at commando level skill, he holds back a bit at first; but when they start to damage his right hand (essential to his performing surgery), Doc quickly subdues both of them.
At one point, he snaps a question at a Nazi interrogating him and gets an answer. The Nazi says, "You have a manner of authority, haven`t you? You ask a question, and I answer before I think." Then Doc sharply asks another question and the man again starts to reply before he catches himself. (Well, the bronze man is not only physically imposing, fantastically wealthy and successful, with all the confidence this would give, but he`s a genuine doctor as well... and they know how to get information out of someone.)
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